Does this sound right on a resume? I have an interview on monday .. Im applyiing within the same company ..?

im applying for a position for human resources.. How can I word this (the Objective) part?





To obtain a position as an Administrative Assistant where my skills and experience will have a positive impact, continued growth, and success of the corporation





OR








To obtain a position as a Human Resources Recruiter where my administrative skills, education, and experience will have a positive impact, continued growth, and success of the corporation








I dont know but it something doesnt seem right.. Help please ..


and here is the rest of my resume please help me proofread .. and tell me what i should edit?








Objective To obtain a position as an Administrative Assistant where my skills and experience will have a positive impact, continued growth, and success of the corporation


Professional Experience 2008 鈥?Present Renaissance Hotel %26amp; Spa


Sales Coordinator


飩?Assist executive team with sales processing; create new opportunities for guest hospitality and accommodation; generate proposals and contracts; prepare weekly sales reports, brochures and marketing bulletins; handle advance deposits and major third party credit cards; created reservations for large accounts and managed outgoing invoices for special billing requests; maintain files and multi task numerous phone lines; convey new ideas by creating spreadsheets and power point presentations; problem solve unpredicted issues; quick learner with computer software; adaptable to fast pace environment


飩?Prompt and effective communication provided to all clients and hotel associates


2008 - 2001 Farmers Insurance Downey, CA


Administrative Assistant/Notary Public


飩?Successfully managed and maintained all clerical and organizational aspects of a large insurance office


飩?Diligently assisted managing insurance agent with all of the following: Managing and monitoring selling performance of employees; maintaining client files and following up with prospects; scheduling appointments and meetings, planning events and preparing monthly reports reflecting incoming profits; resolving problem files and cancellation files; managing multiple phone lines and efficiently transferring calls, filing correspondence and sorting mail


飩?Frequently commissioned my certified skills as a public notary at company鈥檚 request


2000 - 2001 WH Smith Los Angeles, CA


Sales Associate


飩?Provided courteous and excellent customer service to shoppers.


飩?Assisted manager on daily reports and weekly inventory, and demonstrated a team player attitude by collaborating on task with co-workers.


飩?Consistently met monthly sales goals set by management and increased stores monthly revenue by ten percent.





Education Present 鈥?2008 University of Phoenix Gardena, CA


飩?Currently majoring in Criminal Justice


1997鈥?001 Westchester High School Los Angeles, CA


飩?Graduated 3.3 G.P.A


Qualifications %26amp; Skills Proficient with the following computer applications:


飩?Microsoft Office/Powerpoint/Outlook/Excel/Access/1鈥?br>

飩?Bilingual Fluent and literate in Spanish


References available upon request|||Run it through Microsoft Word grammar checker. And don't get too stressed about it; they're really only going to skim the resume to see what jobs you've held, it's not a college paper. Your biggest goal at the interview is to sell yourself. Be confident and ask questions of the interviewer that show you're considering what the job will do for you. And DON'T seem desperate or nervous.|||Both are meaningless statements. Obviously no one is going to write, I want this job so I can do nothing but give other people a hard time and sponge off the company.





You need to really convince them that you care about and understand this job.





I am interesting in working in an administrative position in the human resources department. (full stop, it is a clear statement of goal, then you qualify it). I believe that in this position I can both make a positive contribution to the company through my strong organisational and people orientated skills. (this is a statement of why you would fit this position).





You don't just want to say what you want. You want to always say why you would be suitable for the job. In the interview, in the application and the resume you must also be selling yourself.